A Scary Scene
January18
The clouds were getting darker by the minute. Dusk overhung the colossal sky. The last buts of light died away by the presence of roaring thunder. Lightning arrived soon after with eye damaging bright flashes. It was cold and humid.
The evening didn’t feel normal. In fact it felt far from normal. Shadows appeared in front, behind, and to the sides of me like creepy stalkers.
Nothing was safe.
I like the colossal sky.
I also like that last sentence. It is especially powerful because it has its own paragraph…I think. Remember that paragraphs are recognizable if they are indented or blocked (blank lines in between them). You can easily edit for paragraphing.
Great work with word choice!