The Golden Beach
September27
On the beautiful beach
The hot sun beams down against my face
Soft sand between my toes
Waves crashing into the surf
Beach balls flying through the air
The horizon far beyond the shore
Sand castles along the golden beach
The ocean as blue as the sky
By: Anisha and Hannah
Gorgeous imagery! I especially like “the horizon far beyond the shore.” Just beautiful.
Wow! I can just imagine the sand between my toes as I stretch on the beach shore, relaxing my tense muscles. You wrote that poem beautifully and I love the vivid words you weave into your poem. Beautiful.
This described the beach perfectly and the imagery was extremely vivid. It made me feel as if I were actually on the beach. I loved it good job!