Halloween Porch
October25
To my right there was a colossal spider web with all different types of spiders on it. They had a dark shades of color and were all looking in one direction.
To my left there was actually nothing except for an old rusty rocking chair that kept rocking even thought nothing was on it. It looked as if the wind from the foggy night was swiftly moving it back and forth.
The door standing tall in front of me had a mysterious sign on it which stated “Beware of Haunted House”. Although it didn’t look like a haunted house I was completely convinced.
I like how you used a lot of descriptive words in your writing that made it easy for people to imagine what it looks like. For example, you used colossal instead of big.